my best friend dayana, is whom every woman would like have, she's a person comprehensive, funny, honest, and witty, she could be a kind of person that somebody tell her everythings without she spread.
I met her in the miss universe building , where we had a interview the work, and turned out that was working before in the same, she was very pleasant with me all the time from there we hung out with the same ideas.
well, I remember a christmas when I was very sad becouse I had'nt any money to buy daugther gifts, she was my angel although I did'nt say nothing, she knew, surprisingly, she invited me with my daugthers at her home. when we arrived she gave us the most beautiful and happy christmas that I've been. once time we were angry but we made up, in this moment she is settle down, she has a funny baby, and she moved away.
I've been thinking that the friendship feeds the worst moments, to be strong all the live. and that a friend which does'nt with you in your bad moment, your friend should'nt considerate.
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ResponderEliminarDear Maria,
ResponderEliminarReally nice composition. There are some corrections required, though. For Example: "My best friend Dayana, is the kind of friend whom every woman would like have. She's a comprehensive, funny, honest, and witty person. She could be a kind of person that you may tell her anyything a you may be sure she will not tell anything to anyone." Take a look and let´s improve it. A very promisory blog!
Maria, is a good composition, but dont'n forget that miss universo is a name, you should use the capital letter.
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ResponderEliminarI like your composition but you have a mistake you should write: "An interviuw" instead of "A interviuw" also, for me It's better to write "I didn't say anything" than "I didn't say nothing".
ResponderEliminarI like your composition. But don`t forget to use the capital letter ok!! take care
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